They're so cute! I like your style of drawing humans and I hope to see more. I love their collars and expressions. Sorry, I don't have any critique, but I do like this picture. Lovely hoomans.

xD
I've been drawing a lot more of them lately. Hopefully I'll come up with something decent enough to submit. o:

Thankyooo! -loveloves-

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Mmmyeaah. My cats make some pretty sexy humans. o:

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Bwahahar ;o

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I drew better pictures of them more recently. I might upload them soooon. o:

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wtf o: do you mean your not good with humans?
xD; i do i can't draw beautiful delicate hands like that psh.
the one on the left is very. beautiful

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Mm, crit? Well I love the designs as usual, but crit. Hmmm, well the heads are far too large for starters, it's not so obvious thoug because that's what you expect in a cartoon, there's also too much face and not enough head, again you don't see it so much for the same reason though.
Ares' face is also at two different angles.

THe fingers and hands are off though, difficult things to draw but try doing an anatomy study by taking pictures of hands (female, male, old, young, baby etc) and copying them, take lots in different poses, or just lookat your own hand and adjust the image on paper according to the gender/age you want it to be. (ARES IS MISSING A THUMB! AHHHHH!)

Another little tip is when you are drawing a human draw them naked first, start with a skeleton (stick man or a line, whatever) then flesh out the muscle and fat shapes and THEN put your clothes, don't just draw clothes and stick liddle hands and heads on because often people draw the clothes so tight that the person beneath must be positively anorexic to fit into them.

The final crit is the clothes themselves, don't forget to draw creases in, again, take pictures of people and concentrate on drawing the folds and creases in the clothes, another thing to bear in mind is that different clothes behave differently so again try referecing from lots of styles of clothing and materials, even a few scribble creases around the armpits and crotch make clothes so much more realistic.

But this a wonderful attempt, you did a great job in capturing the differences in personality! ^^

Wowww, thanks for the constructive crits! I really do need them. xD

I've ALWAYS had so much trouble with hands. And yeah, there's seriously something up with Ares' right hand.
Ohhh, I like my people to be impossibly anorexic. Though that's pretty unrealistic in this case since Apollo and Ares are actually pretty healthy in that department... xD

But seriously, thank you SO MUCH for the crits. I really appreciate it, since I've been trying really hard to improve on humans. :]

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